Merge pull request 'Proofreading after-the-fact' (#10) from proofread-ipfs-article into master

Reviewed-on: https://git.deuxfleurs.fr/Deuxfleurs/garagehq.deuxfleurs.fr/pulls/10

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diff --git a/content/blog/2022-fosdem.md b/content/blog/2022-fosdem.md
index 8f1f24e..558ffa8 100644
--- a/content/blog/2022-fosdem.md
+++ b/content/blog/2022-fosdem.md
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ date=2022-02-02
 +++
 
 *FOSDEM is an international meeting about Free Software, organized from Brussels.
-On next Sunday, Febuary 6th, 2022, we will be there to present Garage.*
+On next Sunday, February 6th, 2022, we will be there to present Garage.*
 
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-In 2000, a belgian free software activist going by the name of Raphael Baudin
-set out to create a small event for free software developpers in Brussels.
+In 2000, a Belgian free software activist going by the name of Raphael Baudin
+set out to create a small event for free software developers in Brussels.
 This event quickly became the "Free and Open Source Developers' European Meeting",
-shorthand FOSDEM. 22 years later, FOSDEM is a major event for free software developpers
+shorthand FOSDEM. 22 years later, FOSDEM is a major event for free software developers
 around the world. And for this year, we have the immense pleasure of announcing
 that the Deuxfleurs association will be there to present Garage.
 
@@ -23,18 +23,18 @@ in the last few years. Nothing too unfamiliar to us, as the organization is usin
 the same tools as we are: a combination of Jitsi and Matrix.
 
 We are of course extremely honored that our presentation was accepted.
-If technical details are your thing, we invite you to come share this event with us.
+If technical details are your thing, we invite you to come and share this event with us.
 In all cases, the event will be recorded and available as a VOD (Video On Demand) 
-afterwards. Concerning the details of the organization:
+afterward. Concerning the details of the organization:
 
-**When?** On Sunday, Febuary 6th, 2022, from 10:30 AM to 11:00 AM CET.
+**When?** On Sunday, February 6th, 2022, from 10:30 AM to 11:00 AM CET.
 
 **What for?** Introducing the Garage storage platform.
 
 **By whom?** The presentation will be made by Alex,
-	other developpers will be present to answer questions.
+    other developers will be present to answer questions.
 
-**For who?** The presentation is targetted to a technical audience that is knowledgable in software developpement or systems administration.
+**For who?** The presentation is targeted to a technical audience that is knowledgeable in software development or systems administration.
 
 **Price:** FOSDEM'22 is an entirely free event.
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ afterwards. Concerning the details of the organization:
 
 And if you are not so much of a technical person, but you're dreaming of
 a more ethical and emancipatory digital world,
-keep in tune with news comming from the Deuxfleurs association
+keep in tune with news coming from the Deuxfleurs association
 as we will likely have other events very soon!